That's starting to look like something... Maybe get down to the water level as much as you can, and aim up a little bit..
I try it next time I'm there. Another thing that can be done is darken the red/yellow so the some color difference show in the trees. Short of someone in a red kayak coming through don't hold out much hope for image.It has been a great learning experience.Much better. Can you get lower down to the water? Some interesting clouds/lighting might bump things up some.
OK, Fred beat me to it while I was typing.